Charecters:
Jack:
He is a boy that is really cool he has brown hair everybody likes him
he has a girlfriend called Katherine.He has a brother called Harry
and a sister called Grace.He is good at everything exept for
chemistry.
Harry:He
has brown hair he is the brother of Jack and Grace. He is really
good at chemistry and is jealous of Jack because he thinks everybody
prefers Jack and Harry is in love with Katherine.
Makenzie:She
belives she is really popular but she isent and she always fails her
exams She is a normal high school girl.
Katherine:
She is really pretty and cool and is the girl friend of Jack. She
loves antique clothes.She wasent scared of anithing but acted like if
she was really scared of spiders.
Grace:
She is the sister of Jack and Harry and is the smallest of the
family. She is scared that someone wouLd come in the night and take
her to a country of slavery.
Granny(Elisabeth):
She is a really kind and honest woman that lives in a mansion.She is
a bit mad and loved talking of when she was young .She likes cooking
and kniting so much.
Aunty
Amy: She is a really funny woman that at the age of 16 was a famous
actress of horror stories and loved to tell them the films that she
had done. Also she is a bit fat and has a puppy.
Granpa
Peter: He is a crazy man that is obsessed with horses .And has 2
beautiful horses . One died last year, nowone new how.
Skarlet:
mother of the kids.
Chapter
1 : A New Home
Grace
looked out the window and saw a little village. “Look ” said
mum. “We will live Hear and that will be your school ,don’t you
love it” said mum in an exiting voice.” yeah “I said. I arrived
at my new home, I saw a tinny home close to a small poor looking
street.”Hey Grace this will be our home and granny lives close by.
And Aunty Ami! Isen’t that good!!!) said mum.
“Yeah
sure” said Harry. “It’s ok for me” said Jack.
“And
we are going to change school tomorrow will be your first day” said
mum. “ I hate that idea” said Jack. “Fine, I don’t care what
you say” Said Harry.
“Stop
fighting boys!!!!!” said mum.
“Here
we are now go inside and get your room sorted out that will stop you
fighting” said Mum.”Fine mum” said the boys both at the same
time. As Jack and Harry came in the house mum said” Boys just so
you know tomorrow we are going to visit granny and you are going to
school so go to bed early ”After dinner Grace went to bed after
brushing her teeth. “Well done grace” said mum to grace “Good
night” mum said. “Good night” said Grace. At night grace had a
horrible nightmare and woke up in the morning terrified. Her night
mare was that a person had taken her to a slavery country.”Get
ready for school boy’s” said mum.
At
school Jack met a girl called Katherine and fell in love with her.
After school they walked to granny’s and played a few fun games
while Harry investigated granny’s home.
They
went to sleep and in the morning Grace had disappeared they searched
everywhere for her but now one could find her. The news was spread
all around the world but now one new where she was except for one
person the kidnapper. He had taken her to Mauritania a place where
slaves are still allowed today. “Wonderful, it’s our 2nd
day here and Grace has disappeared, wonderful” said mum.
Chapter
2: School
Mackenzie
invited Jack to her party on Friday but then a tini problem appeared.
"Hi Jack" Katherine said "I wanted to invite you to my
party on Friday" She went on.
"Look
I am very sorry but I can't go to your party and Mackenzie had
invited me and.. I'm just really sorry. Ok?" Jack said. "Yeah
i'm fine with that I just er... well I just wanted to you now, invite
you that's all but if you can't I compleatly understand, It's just
normaly now one sais no to me but really it's fine" Katherine
said a bit sad but trying to hide it. " Are you sure I mean if
you are very sad then I can go but..." Jack said. "Look
really i'm fine and it doesn’t matter." Katherine said. "Look
i'll tell you and only you. The thing is my sister disappered a few
days ago" Jack said, his eyes filling with tears. "It was
in my grandmothers house she just went to bed and in the morning she
was gone. Now one knows where she is but i'm telling you I don't
think she is in this country because every single house has been
checked and there is no sign of her and on the day of your birthday
party is when I am going to my grandmothers and so I can't go. I'm
sorry" said Jack. "oh it's fine I just didn’t now"
said Katherine . "Well I have to go going. By!" said Jack
"By" said Katherine. "We have got chemistry now"
said the teacher
Jack
was surprised to see his brother understand everything and he seemed
to like it for Jack it was awkward, for he was good at everything but
not that good at chemistry. After school everybody rushed outside to
go to party's or to any activity. Instead Jack was bored for he was
going to have to see granny Elisabeth, aunt Ami and his 3 cousins and
he was going to stay there for one night and in that exact house
Grace had disappered. He was really looking forward to it (in joke
way).
Granny's
When
Jack arrived home I told mum everything about that He didn’t want
to go to granny's because of what happened to Grace , that he wanted
to go to Katherine's party... "Look Jack you are an old boy now.
You aren't going to tell me that you are still scared of what
happened to Grace." mum said. "Look mum she was my sister
and I loved her loads and you are expecting me to forget it just like
that! I can't stand this and I don't now why people don't understand
me!" Jack said angrily as he slammed the door of his room behind
him. "Oh, what have I done now?" Mum said. A few hours
later mum called for them: "Jack, Harry we are leaving common!"
mum said
"We
are coming" Jack said. They hopped on the car and drove over to
granny's. "Mum, when are we arriving?" Jack said. " we
are here!" mum said.
"Great"
said Jack. "Welcome, everybody is inside and the dinner is
ready!" gran said "Thank you so much granny" said
Jack.
Truth
or Dare?
After
Dinner the boys where bored because Granny was telling them all her
stupid old life so they decided to play truth or dare. "Truth or
dare Tom?" Josh said. "Dare" Tom said. "you have
to go and lick the floor!" Josh said. " Ok" Tom said.
After licking the floor it was Joshes turn. "Truth or dare
Josh?" Jack said "dare, so I doesn’t look like I’m
stupid." said Josh "Ok I have decided you have to ask a
total stranger for there number.
"Ok"
said Josh as he went outside . "Hey old lady, give me your phone
number!" Josh said. "Hey, it's none of your business young
boy!" The old lady said "Yeah I have done it guys"
Josh said. "Well done!" they said. "Jacks turn!"
Tom said "Ok" Jack said "Truth or Dare?" Harry
said "Dare" Jack said firmly. "What shall we do for
him?" Harry said. "I've got it! He has to sleep in the room
that is prohibited that will be cool !" Harry said. "Fine,
whatever." Jack said. "Cool" They all said. So Jack
went to sleep in the room that was prohibited. Soon he was there and
he went to sleep. When he woke up he saw a dark figure in the door.
As it slowely opened he realized it was his brother, but it couldent
be! How could he?! He saw him with a knife and new he was soon going
to die. Just then the world disappered for Jack. Harry coulden't
leave the body so he got grapa's acid and therew it over him and only
his plastic glasses where left. in the morning he wasen't there. Ask
for Grace she wasen't saved she stayed in Mauritania suffering every
day. And with this story i'm triyng to say that with Grace she is one
of lots that could be slaves out there so I just wanted you to think
of them!
The
End!!!!!!!!
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