The Abandoned House, by Anonymous

Chapter1: the Black house

Luke and Rocio are brothers and they have a pet: Strickes(a white tiger)  she is 15 or 16 years, she comes from the Indian forest. They have a friend who is called Robin who is in love with Rocio, they all are 18 years old. The oldest is Robin, in the middle is Rocio, and in the last place is Luke.  They have super powers: Rocio has the power of nature and animal, Luke has fire and water powers, Robin has super speed and super strength and Strikes can talk with all creatures which live inside the sea and humans.  They all go to the University.

One day going to the University, they passed by an abandoned house that 
was all black: black entrance (door),black curtains, black roof,  black this,
black that... 
''WAIT!!!!!''exclaimed Rocio. 
''Yes if you shout again you will leave me deaf'' said Luke.
''No, not that, a hand closed the door" answered Rocio. ''Hmm'' thought Rocio,
''Yes hmm'' copied Luke, ''yes hmm'' repeated Robin.
''Hey, what are you humming at'' said Rocio.
''You hummed so I ...we hummed" said Robin and Luke. There was a curious 
black figure spying on them, they ran to school.

Chapter 2: the note

In school, that same day, in Science class...''with calm, with calm...'' said the teacher, BUMMM!!!!!!!. The Science class exploded. The black figure appeared again, he had some bombs in his hands, one was on fire and suddenly he threw the bomb and ran away.
After school, they went to buy bread. There was a new baker, his name was Patrick. He was American, it was his first day in the city and suddenly Patrick said "for Rocio" and gives her a note,  She was going to read it one way or another. 

Chapter 3: Patrick 

The next day, they were giving Strickes a walk and going to buy bread 
"let's go to...WHAT!!!!!" shouted Rocio, the bakery was closed. They asked
a baker, who was getting all his things out, if they could enter.
"Yes of course you can, wait a second..." he answered. They saw a room and there was a bed, on top of it there was Patrick lying dead!!! Without a drop of blood!!!! 
"But how did he do it???" said Luke, "Hey look here!" exclaimed Robin. There was a footprint with a hole in it.They wanted to investigate "let's go to the house" said Strikes. "But first 
let's get a chocolate cake". Five minutes later, "let's go" said again Rocio. 
"Hey hey hey, I ate very little" said Luke. "Let's go come on!!!" repeat Robin pulling him out of the bakery.

Chapter 4: inside the Black house  

"Next stop the black house" said Luke very frightened. At midnight they 
passed the entry door, the door closed behind them with a boooommm.
In the house, there was so many doors, skulls, stairs and spiders that made Rocio think "this guy is a lover of terror". They carried walking through the black house. Fifty rooms in the first floor, sixty in the second, forty in the third, fifty in the fourth, sixty in the fifth, fifty in the sixth and forty in the seventh floor.  They look beyond the house and started to walked through the terrific house. There was a little elevator for four people. In the first floor a black sign, where it put in white "England", was in front of each of the fifty doors; all the historical corps were inside. 

The four children got inside the elevator and went to the last floor. The last room of all the house was his bedroom. 
They passed through the door and saw him (well his shadow), and wanted to 
talk to him but he is not one of those people who talked a lot but he immediately got his dagger out. They ran and ran until they reached the garden.

Chapter 5: the ridiculous and infant theatre.

They were hidden behind a tree (looks like a huge forest). The black figure walked in the garden, there was a button on the floor and accidentally he pushed it: it was a theatre of little children, that was ridiculous and childish and said something like this "lalalalala, lala, lala, I like the good life, we got rid of the guy in black". "Oohhh, come on, why did I put this button here??" said the man in black ... "and just in this moment I have to press it!!!"  When the theatre finished, Robin with his super speed made him dizzy,  Luke made a circle of fire around him and Rocio said to a tree to trap him.

Three minutes later they started to talk to him.  "Why did you kill Patrick?" asked Rocio and "how did you do it with out leaving a drop of blood" continued Luke. 
"And what about your broken shoe? how did you make a hole?" said Robin. 
"Ok, let me start. Everything began when I was born in ninety sixty five in 
Drusselstein. I was not an ordinary child, I was always in black like I'm now, other children laughed at me and that, some day would going to change. I'm an inmortal man so I would swear my revenge. My mother gave me a dagger to protect me, it was a special one because it absorves blood.
 When I saw a child that was in Drusselstein I killed him by night and kept his blood in my dagger to give more power. I came to Spain with my family". "Wow"said Rocio ''I never imagined it like that'' said luke and Robin.

Chapter 6: the end

Luke sent him back to Druselstein.  After the graduation,Robin and Rocio were a cuple. Six months later they got married.

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